[DAMMED] Mind in a Box

Greetings from

So this one is pretty awesome. It sure stands out among many thumbs that show up on my feed. The idea is great. Creative and mysterious. The colours are great. Nice contrast between the green and orange. I even like the contrast of the more realistic approach you used on the girl vs. simplistic approach you used for the background. I only have three suggestions I consider constructive:

1) The light source. If you look at the art pieces by Mezamero (wait, if this name is Japanese, it means wake up!), he/she uses strong contrast between the light and shadow. I think you are trying too but the contrast is right now a bit weak and the light source is a bit unclear. If the light is as is, it is pretty weak, so her body would most likely much darker. If the light is lighting up the edge of her shoulder (i.e., backside), it shouldn't cast a light on the edge of her breasts (almost frontside). Try using more contrast between your light and dark values and be more strict about the light source, and our piece will really pop out!

2) Anatomy is a bit off. The face is great, but the alignment with shoulders seems bit skewed. Not too noticeable but gives a bit of a weird feel. Like the distance from the top of her right shoulder to her breast is too long. But this stuff is easily fixable by using a model. 

3) The orange light is too dim. It's a great idea, but go bold! Use much stronger and brighter orange to pop the piece more.

That's it. Otherwise I think this is a great work. Keep it up

Cheerios
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